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· Work · john@cardim.seContract update needed before Friday
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Erika Lindgren
erika@cardim.se · 12 min ago
AI summary
Client wants section 4.2 reworded and 30-day termination notice. Final redline due Friday EOD.
Action items
- Review redlined MSA v3
- Approve section 4.2 wording
- Send final version by Friday 17:00
Tone
Polite, urgent
Deadline
Friday, 17:00
Inbox
Work
Suggested reply
Hi Erika, I'll review the redline this afternoon and send approval before Thursday so legal has buffer time.
Hi John,
Our enterprise client has requested a few changes to the master service agreement before signing. Most importantly, they want section 4.2 reworded to clarify data ownership and a shorter termination notice (30 days instead of 60).
Could you review the attached redline today? We need to send the final version back by Friday EOD or risk pushing the deal into next quarter.
Thanks,
Erika
Attachments
MSA_v3_redline.pdf
Why Critical? Sender is your CEO. Subject contains 'contract' and explicit deadline.